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Open Poetry #33

A morning's isle

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2004-10-19 12:00 PM

A morning’s isle

As I go by, beside this tree.
I ought,
though why do you follow me.
Bring lasting vivid,
this island of dew.
Tomorrow’s moment
so distant are you.
To wish for it not,
now whispers of lot.
A morning’s isle,
where the beauty is sought.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
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since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2004-10-19 01:10 PM

seems like a beautiful place poe,

but you left me wanting more

but maybe that was the point of the poem...anywyas i enjoyed this...this will be my poem of the day!

Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move
Over arms length they'll break protocol
Jealous envy for the youngest one

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-11-05 09:30 AM

neat write...short and sweet

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-11-05 08:51 PM

like this...i think it's good the way it is, but i wouldn't mind more!

~Alli~

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