Open Poetry #33 |
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Blessed Be |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Blessed be the raging seas which harbor our catastrophies. Protect us from the violent storms which conjure up those wicked forms. Guide our vessels through the endless night which swallow whole a sailor’s plight. Shroud the ancient shorelines raped as forging froths from seas escaped. Blessed be the raging sea keeping safe the land and me. quatro 10-12-04 I wrote this for an event we will be having here in town this weekend called "Heat and Hurricane Expulsion". It is sort of like blessing the sea and protecting our island from hurricanes and storms. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very well done Quatro. I enjoyed this and this sounds like a fantastic event. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write..extremely well done..great imagery. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Shroud the ancient shorelines raped as forging froths from seas escaped. Love the imagery in these two lines. Wonderful ![]() cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A resident witch tells me if you light a candle and gently blow the smoke in the direction away from where the hurricane is blowing it helps ![]() ![]() How lovely your offering is to the sea, and I will also say, let you, "Blessed Be." |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Thanks to you all who replied to my post. The event was great and although it was a cloudy and humid day, we proceeded with the expelling of the heat and hurricanes. With just a few droplets of rain, we ended with a sense of satisfaction that our job was done. quatro |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
KEEPER! |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
i love this!! ![]() ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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