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Open Poetry #33

Envying Your Words

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-10-19 09:05 AM

Envying Your Words

I danced too young
on the arm of breezes that floated
from shore
blushing from the warmth
of interaction
a path of fast fury and
loving that covered the bareness of youth

today
I am still...
watching from the shadows
as my feet no longer have their power
and my arms can no longer reach
the touching of another
and those once upons have yet
to be forgiven

**always, *C
(love to read you)
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-10-19 09:17 AM

So gentle a write..lovely yet melancholy.
Well done M.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

2 posted 2004-10-19 09:29 AM

Enjoying Your Words

Rf

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-10-19 09:37 AM

I danced too young as well..

ever see the movie "Jerry Mcguire?"

remember the scene where she is telling him its over and she says something like...we could waste years being polite....(words to that effect)...that line always stayed with me...some people do that. I stayed 19 yrs.

*sigh*

sad really.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2004-10-19 08:57 PM

I see a lot of "growth" in the two pieces of you I've read tonight...plumb proud of you.

Jimmy

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-10-19 09:03 PM

M.  You always write poetry that comes from
within,  an expression of yourself.  And
you seldom ever write something that isn't
topnotch.  I don't think you ever have.

I know someone will enjoy the post,  a lucky
person for sure.

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