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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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What happens when that burning desire isn't shared when young lovers hold back on what others dare to examine the limits of their wondrous embrace while others seek to fit selfish love in their rat race... Just being realistic, my friend Mr Ideal your quest for shared love, far from real.. has not been my conscious prize, that dreams have had me more satisfied. I have had to work for affection... my mind turned off on falsehood, my cheek has faced an opposite direction. The once kindled love still flickers some couples embrace first, then bicker this young lover has matured I am no more naive in romantic undertakings tired of the monotony of the same making asked to share love that is poorly returned love's tenderness, reached its score in its sojourn... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sometimes, love only swims in the shallow end of the pool. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well said Martin, though sad, so true |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes indeed, love doesn't mind giving, but when not returned, it can become very sad Written with conviction and truth |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Amen. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks all  It is sad Lee when love isn't returned or spurned...today I realize there are people who just don't know how to share, let alone refuse to give and take... |
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