Open Poetry #33 |
sunflowers burst the seams |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sunflowers burst the seams of starkness eyes captured within glowing starred skies and etchings of miner hearts stuck in timeless quicksand and forever I say is not long enough to know the all of you for even now I find your heart in a blade of grass, feel your angst within the very fall of the sunflower seed’s head as it drops its gaze, turning its face from the sun. And you never knew someone would stand here in bared soul, missing you, missing the blue only you knew how to convey all the hopes and dreams in lonely midnight screams captured within brushed moments, hushed sighs, society’s lies set aside and all the while one heart did bleed true did bleed need (the way only you could do) while quietly I now survey the horizon, absorbing the wildest west winds and sweetest scents of grace that still caress an upturned face as one who begged God for true love but found instead pain and sorrow oh, the easeled life of strife caught within those never ending swirls and if the heart never lies I do believe I know you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have to tell you that this IS the one! For me anyway. This is my absolute favorite of yours now Kacy, and worth waiting for. Beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And you never knew someone would stand here in bared soul, missing you, missing the blue only you knew how to convey all the hopes and dreams in lonely midnight screams captured within brushed moments, hushed sighs, society’s lies set aside and all the while one heart did bleed true did bleed need (the way only you could do) while quietly I now survey the horizon, absorbing the wildest west winds and sweetest scents of grace that still caress an upturned face as one who begged God for true love but found instead pain and sorrow oh, the easeled life of strife caught within those never ending swirls and if the heart never lies I do believe I know you. =========================== more like a heart bursting at the seams... my oh my...this is lovely Kacy.... me thinks I shall place it in me treasure chest I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
whispering thank yous for listening to this heartbeat |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH my Kacy!! This is exquisite! The feelings here are so real. This is by far the best piece you have ever written. I do hope you will share more of this side of you with us. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
An absolute jewel to read Well done ^_^ and then He created the horse... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just like a sunflower, Kacy. I love them yanno. A flower that bears so much seed it bends... reminds me of the poet who wrote it. |
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