October will leave me with this

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2004-10-18 07:59 PM

enjoying the colors
and fresh feelings of the coming winter
&         light autumn breeze

I just watch    him seating there reading
his morning   fill

                               I reach for the creamer --
to lighten        my coffee
he looks at me             and smiles
we talk awhile-flirting eyes

I barely touch his fingers
looking down--

{moment of thought}

as if I can stir rain
watching it drip from the
overhangs and slide the windows

   I am moved

I just have to
         look at him

& wonder when his hands
will once again meet the small of my back

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2004-10-18 08:15 PM

AN UNSAID WORD

She who has power to call her man
From that estranged intensity
Where his mind forages alone,
Yet keeps her peace and leaves him free,
And when his thoughts to her return
Stands where he left her, still his own,
Knows this the hardest thing to learn.

Adrienne Rich

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2004-10-18 08:22 PM

Hopefully his touch will not be a full year from now!!!

such a touch of words ... ! : )

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-10-18 08:44 PM

awesome!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-10-18 09:20 PM

I don't think it will be too long Lauren..
This is lovely, as are you.
Hugs pretty lady~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-18 10:17 PM

lovely in its wistful longing - beautifully sculpted -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-10-19 12:56 PM

I love the small of your back...er, should I say the small of a womans back...James

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2004-10-19 01:19 AM

If you went searching for insipiration and found this...well do it again! I love it, a lot.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-10-19 04:49 AM

Stunning, Lauren. Sigh.

Maree

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-10-19 07:38 AM

(sighs) and more sighs

the power of love is truly miraculous...those intense feelings...

and you've captured them quite well....
enjoyed

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

10 posted 2004-10-19 07:53 AM

lovely motion in this...

**babygirl**

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2004-10-19 07:57 AM

"I am moved

I just have to
look at him"

A rare moment and feeling.

Very nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2004-10-19 08:49 AM

L~ knowing and feeling every word of this one dear

sister....
every word....sigh....

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

13 posted 2004-10-19 06:58 PM

I love "October" poems.

This did not disappoint me.

Contabo

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