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Into the Spider's world#2
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Into the Spider's world#2 |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 Could ever be my world like this? A landscape formed of tissue light Few strings attached will keep it up A Spider in her world is bright She runs her house from center point Vibrations hit her right at heart Keeping track of every line A Spider in her world is smart She uses wind as transportation Builds her house each day anew Bungee jumping is her skill A Spider in her world's not blue The only thing withholding me Is that I have to eat my man And as I do have fear of heights A bungee jump is no good plan So I'll just watch her world from here Standing at a distance safe And tell you honestly the truth I like Spiders, but I'm not brave  Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Bungee jumping is her skill" LOL, what a great perspective! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This was a true treat and joy to read and I absolutely loved the bungee jump line. Glad to see your name here and hope to see it many times more. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Titia, I promise you this, I will never forget your line about bungee jumping when I see a spider hanging from a silken filament. I'm sure that if you were a spider, you would not be of the man-eating variety!  Loves 'n Laughs, Linda |
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