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Open Poetry #33

One Great Oak

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-10-17 04:48 PM

chilled
forlorn
aching from toes
to timber tips

a great oak cries
shivering
shaking
and with a nodding,
whispers,

"Leaf me alone!"

©October 17, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

[This message has been edited by VAS (10-17-2004 05:54 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-10-17 04:51 PM

Too cute Virginia....enjoyed this, especially the ending.

Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-10-24 08:30 PM

'leaf me alone'
and off they fly.......

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-10-25 04:01 AM

cute

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

4 posted 2004-10-27 01:36 PM

Cute....INDEED.

INclan

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