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Said In Ancient Voices
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Said In Ancient Voices |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Once nautical felicitous of aerial, blended play in clay pots The earth in celebration gave roots divine Venturing a limb into my heart, that stirred of magic As leaf, then flower so became, drawing wing and finally whisper Not in folklore, or vintage vagabond…but as in a new creation Soft grass slippers padded footprints gently on the sand Leaving but a kissed impression, undeniable, indestructible That the sky blushed blue and opened spaces in the white clouds Of golden fingers, passages to heaven, a map for heart and soul So beautiful the entwine of spirits, that whisper rose in autumn Deeper, growing deeper in a throaty pigment of red and jolly orange Until the shores pulled back in sigh, gulping of the wonder at its edges And dawn shone her lovely face in fringe of pink and purple make Waving slowly to the fall of day, tickling the world into repose at sunset And night call became the howling of return…return to the arms of all And bowed, my body and my mind in one naked moment heard These ancient tongues that called the sun and the moon to light As love received his name Copyright Kkh 10/17/04 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And dawn shone her lovely face in fringe of pink and purple make Waving slowly to the fall of day, tickling the world into repose at sunset And night call became the howling of return…return to the arms of all And bowed, my body and my mind in one naked moment heard These ancient tongues that called the sun and the moon to light As love received his name" Oh my Kathleen...I am in awe of your writing. This is so beautiful!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, you amaze me with the broad spectrum of topics that you can write so well. Each a gem, as are you. Very well done! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Until the shores pulled back in sigh, gulping of the wonder at its edges The above line and the last line are my very favorites of this vibrant, peaceful piece. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ I stand in quiet awe at the beauty of this penning~ 'And bowed, my body and my mind in one naked moment heard These ancient tongues that called the sun and the moon to light As love received his name' How very intuned you are to the Spirit movement~ I just love the all of this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this contains so much wonder, TD... beautifully penned and graceful as ever. enjoyed this very much.  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly lyrical! Eric |
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