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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-10-17 08:58 AM

One Morning

Walking through the early morn
Passing through the dew of dawn
I saw the lifting of the night
And the coming of the mornings light

The sky was changing in its core
To a wonderment of awe
Changing silver into gold
In the shifting clouds of fold

And I within its compliment
Dissolved into its firmament
Took homage in the mornings goal
And let it filter through my soul

I mingled with the all in one
Until the miracle was done
And shed a tear to match the dew
To stay a part this awesome view

And when the sun had forced the day
It’s only then I lost my way.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

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right...there

1 posted 2004-10-17 09:19 AM

Beautiful Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-10-17 09:27 AM

A most beautiful morning read Sy!
So good to wake up to you and a hot cup of tea again.

~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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3 posted 2004-10-17 09:27 AM

I saw the lifting of the night
And the coming of the mornings light

The sky was changing in its core
To a wonderment of awe
Changing silver into gold
In the shifting clouds of fold

And I within its compliment
Dissolved into its firmament
Took homage in the mornings goal
And let it filter through my soul

I mingled with the all in one
Until the miracle was done
And shed a tear to match the dew
To stay a part this awesome view
=====================

Sy Sy Sy...how am I gonna pic fave lines from this gem...I love this sunrise of rhymes...you paint the sky with your words...me thinks your words should be painted across that sky...and so I did.

*ww*

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-10-17 09:39 AM

scorpio
Good morning and thank you so much.

Nancy,
A pleasure to think tea with you.

Good morning.

JM,
If there is such a thing as comming back,
beware not of Randy but of Sy.
Winkiewinkie

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2004-10-17 09:55 AM

Top O' the mornin', Sy

Enjoyed this!

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2004-10-17 10:14 AM

This is the time of year when we do have dew here, and I enjoy it....despite having to wash my car three times as often....

You paint this scene so clearly, with love behind every stroke of your brush...took me right along, you did!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-10-17 10:58 AM

wranx
Speaking of top of the morning I've been to top and bottom. Thanks for the enjoy.

Ratleader
Glad you could come along, it was a lovely morning.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2004-10-17 11:13 AM

And I within its compliment
Dissolved into its firmament
Took homage in the mornings goal
And let it filter through my soul

~*~

For the lucky ones,
they know when that
sense of transformation
is held within a kiss
of light...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2004-10-17 11:27 AM

Sunshine
I kiss your light.

Martie

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California

10 posted 2004-10-17 12:10 PM

sy ....this is so incredibly beautiful!

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

11 posted 2004-10-17 12:16 PM

The most important and beautiful part of any day and you showcased it wonderfully. So very nice to come in to this.

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

12 posted 2004-10-17 12:37 PM

Lovely~

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

13 posted 2004-10-17 12:44 PM

Sy, your words and JM's pics really lift my heart this morning.
Shouldn't you be working on a book together???
Nice capturing of moments...

K

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2004-10-17 01:05 PM

Martie
Not near the true of it.

Mark,
Your replies are like the mornings dew, thank you

Chanson
Lovely is like fresh fuel on the fire.

Kahlil
We are and will continue on the book as soon as she settles down in her new house.
Thank you.

serenity blaze
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15 posted 2004-10-17 05:23 PM

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY

Now there's my buddy!

*smothering you with smooches*

I sooooooooooo missed you sy.

*battin' eyelashes*

Now maybe things will get back to normal around here!

Love you!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

16 posted 2004-10-17 09:15 PM

always the last lines...get me good

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2004-10-17 10:03 PM

serenity,
I'm going to put some of that YAYAYAYAYAYA
and battin' eyelashes away for a rainy day.
Thank you sweety.

Passing,
You are a dear,

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