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jennirey
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since 2002-01-24
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North Richland HillsTx

0 posted 2004-10-17 08:30 AM



When the veil of intrigue fell away
When the dance became mundane
When the dreams of life are no longer a masquerade.
The image that you painted seemed
As a vague resemblance of what it should be
Hope cries in my soul
I feel lost in this reverie
A debt is begotten and not paid.
A beloved heirloom put away,
Hidden in a chest for a later day.
I scream inside wanting you to wake.
Where am I and where are we.
I am here don’t you see me.
Dust grows thick on the corners.
I am alone, yet we are together.
Hope screams in my soul,
For what we used to be.

© Copyright 2004 Jennifer Reynoso - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2004-10-17 08:39 AM


“Any idiot can rise to a crisis.
It’s this day to day living
that grinds us down.”

Anton Chekhov


Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

2 posted 2004-10-17 11:42 AM


I like this... so sad
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