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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-10-15 02:23 AM

Closely Distant

anonymously in love
a secret whispered to the dark
where the wind carries my hope
close with a distance to go
on a certain journey
traveling to a free spirit

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-10-15 02:25 AM

pick ME???

smiling...

missed you ladyslick

so lovely so sad so you

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2004-10-15 03:17 AM

i have felt love at an arm's distance, only to have perception play it's mean tricks...enjoyed this.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2004-10-15 07:43 PM

Wer seines Lebens viele Widersinne

She who reconciles the ill-matched threads
of her life, and weaves them gratefully
into a single cloth—
it’s she who drives the loudmouths from the hall
and clears it for a different celebration

where the one guest is you.
In the softness of evening
it’s you she receives.

You are the partner of her loneliness,
the unspeaking center of her monologues.
With each disclosure you encompass more
and she stretches beyond what limits her,
to hold you.

Rainer Maria Rilke

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-10-15 07:52 PM

Wonderful write Helen...
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

5 posted 2004-10-16 03:51 PM

very nice....to the point. It let me in.... then showed me the door.

I like that.

Contabo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-10-16 10:06 PM

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2004-10-17 10:25 AM

May that whisper find the ear that deserves to hear it....

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______________Ratleader______________

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2004-10-17 12:24 PM

anonymously in love
a secret whispered to the dark
where the wind carries my hope
****************

On a breeze sometimes is the best way to place a message like this as I believe it can be the best messenger there is when we are paying attention. Enjoyed the thoughts much.

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