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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-10-17 12:36 PM


Love and Adore

I'm on my way,
it's a quarter until three,
oh I just missed
my honeys call for me.
She better not be
saying "later gater"
or I'll be madder
than a coon dog,
she'll be running
up a tree, trying
real hard to get
away from me,
because she promised
we'd meet at three.
Better check the
message she left
for me, she said
she's a little sad
and she misses me,
and now she's saying
pick her up at four,
instead of at three.
Well that's alright,
there's little difference
between three and four,
I can wait another hour
to be with the woman
that I love and adore.

JamesLee
October`17
2004

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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-10-17 12:43 PM


Smiling -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2004-10-17 03:51 AM


You better be patient ... or she might postpone another hour ...

Lovely outburst of your heart in love.
Love, Margherita

Copperbell
Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

3 posted 2004-10-17 11:38 AM


yes, smiling - try waiting 29 days
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-10-19 12:49 PM


Thank you Susan, Margherita and Copperbell...at least we can say that waiting develops patience...James
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