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Open Poetry #33

Of Stars and Clay

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-10-16 03:53 PM

"Of stars and clay"

Under all the fading stars
She's every tear you cry.
When stars fall you wish of her,
But you won't get what you want
-If its my star you wish from-
because I'm a star child.
I'm not the earth bound children
I can wash away the mud,
because rivers won't wash me away.
I am not-
clay to mold.

Juju

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-10-16 06:20 PM

Gazing at the stars ... he will recognize you as the star child in the end!

A very lovely piece!

Love, Margherita

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-10-16 09:48 PM

Thank you.

(:

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-10-17 08:18 PM

good ending there!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2004-10-17 08:36 PM

indeed, you are NOT clay to mold. Enjoyed

and then He created the horse...

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2004-10-18 02:09 AM

Thank you, I am glad you liked my poems.

Juju

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