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~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-10-16 11:29 AM

I am here
as much
as I am there

I relinquish
my senses
to the pattern
of the wind

I manifest
your need
& still maintain
my freedom

a creature
of paradox
& satisfaction

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2004-10-16 11:56 AM

oo-hoooo, ~K~, I love this, title and ALL!
Very tasty. I'm keeping it.

(Dig your picture, too.)

K

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2004-10-16 12:00 PM

A creature of extreme talent, too, if you can accomplish such, that 3rd stanza is a star for which to shoot! Wonderful!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-10-16 12:33 PM

Flushed my cheeks in the heightened senses of the chariot!
Wonderful.
TD

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2004-10-16 02:55 PM

excellent. those closing lines..perfect

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

5 posted 2004-10-17 08:53 AM

K,

This is very much
like a meaningful glance.

John

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-10-17 07:59 PM

Enjoyed...James

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-10-17 10:57 PM

i ditto aenimal

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2004-10-18 05:11 PM

more than well done, K
God, I love your writing.
Thick with depth.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2004-10-18 06:17 PM

deep sigh...

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

10 posted 2004-10-19 04:32 AM

In a brief spill of words...you challenge the soul. Greatly enjoyed.

Robert Joseph

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2004-10-19 09:02 AM

Oh yes.

excellent!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2004-10-19 09:04 AM

Fantastic write!
So much in this.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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