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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-10-16 10:12 AM

MyStory

I practice this release of pain
that winds its way throughout
pretending reasons other than
including those of doubt

But it is the pain that favors me
and keeps me wrapped in heat
so silently I press my thoughts
the choice of not to meet

A treasure chest once full of hope
and dreams that floated words
those three of past, the "I love you's"
are captured but not heard

They lie in rest, page after page
in journaled graphic lines
for only I can see their feel
and feel their means' designs

Letting go because of need
and needing letting go
is offered as a gift to one
because of need to know

There's more to me than what one sees
and more than what is told
though silently the eyes in plea
will never let go hold

Of those three words, those felt for him
the one who lives in gray
for reasons kept unselfishly
this love is tucked away

The pain that rises, spreads its ache
in heart, and reaches in
pulls apart the best of me
and paths me way too thin

Inside there is a soreness that
prevents tomorrow's cure
the pride of which belies the truth
(of loving evermore)

So once again, with pain in tow
alone, immune's retreat
pondering what can't be shared
when loving's incomplete.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-10-16 10:28 AM

MzBliss~

'There's more to me than what one sees
and more than what is told'

A sad poignancy pervades this piece ...
but I know that underneath
is happy,
waiting for a time to be unearthed ...
and I pray it comes for you ... sooner than soon~

*Heart-Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2004-10-16 10:37 AM

Question

Know the various abuses of the locution,
know all the **** one may have to eat in the afterhaze;
yet if you cannot say to another you, “I love you,”
how can you ever say anything anymore anywhere
in this world?

Anselm Hollo

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

3 posted 2004-10-16 10:52 AM

oh....longing so vividly painted...

beautiful write!
**babygirL**

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-10-16 11:28 AM

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-10-16 01:55 PM

You are a jewel waiting to be discovered ~ and lucky be the man who finds you.

Linda

Mary Parry
Junior Member

since 2004-10-12

Posts 45
Felixstowe, England

6 posted 2004-10-16 02:04 PM

So beautiful.....and so sad.

How could any man walk away from such depth of feeling?

You deserve much happiness, and I pray that one day it will be yours.

Mary

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