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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-15 08:36 AM

we watch movies there
in our porch swing minds
you say your hands are cold
and put them down my back

I call you names then
and look for a frog
or a spider
to make you run

I stole the chocolate
from some stranger's frige
you took off your sweatshirt
and dared me, so I did

your bare feet made tracks
on my long tailed shirt
and my fingers tangled your hair
you said kissing was fun

but you wanted your gum back
and we should be more quiet
since the neighbors might hear
and if we woke the kids

what would they think

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Dark

scribblenote: must be a movie I saw, can't be real...eeewwwww and he got her gum too...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-10-15 08:40 AM

*chomping my gum serious*

asking

"WHAT?" innocent

grin

sexy stuff

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-10-15 08:42 AM

The kids would think how lucky
they are...

put the gum on the post...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2004-10-15 08:53 AM

she's sexy, ain't she?

gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

c'mere woman

*laughing*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-10-15 09:02 AM

Your morning offering gave me smile eyes Dark.

Love this one.

Wanna piece of gum?

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-10-15 09:17 AM

mmm juicyfruit

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-10-15 09:21 AM

heck, if we're sharin gum, might as well be trident, keeps your teeth white

Great Friday Morning Read....thanks a bunch

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

7 posted 2004-10-15 09:58 AM

playful stuff daddydream-man...lol

spiders & chocolate...how sweet is that..

**babygirL**

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-10-15 10:10 AM

So many fun images, such a playful heart revealed, she is a lucky girl - but gum? Hmmmm - I definitely go for the bed post. Now the chocolate! Uh-huh

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2004-10-15 10:20 AM

Now this sounds like a perfect night...

How well you wrote it!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2004-10-15 10:24 AM

LOL at Serenity...me?

It just brought back wonderful visions
of my parents acting like kids

our dog barking at the back door because
Dad had his hands on Mom, making her giggle...

we kids grinning because Mom's blush was
so danged pretty...

And Dad's laughter singing through
the house...

and his song about putting the gum on the bedpost overnight...

Yep.

Good times.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2004-10-15 11:58 AM

DS

Love the playful feeling of this porchswing time.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2004-10-16 12:19 PM

yeah...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

13 posted 2004-10-16 10:08 AM

Ooh, I do like the way you turn this ending!

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2004-10-17 12:27 PM

Enjoyoed....James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

15 posted 2004-10-17 12:41 PM

Revisiting and smiling all over again - yummie stuff, Dark -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

16 posted 2004-10-18 08:57 AM

ahaha Kari's being bad, again
LMAO

Dark, they sure would be lucky . . .

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

17 posted 2004-10-18 02:01 PM

Now DS that put a whole new meaning into that afternoon delight

that I remember well. The gum would have worked, yes it would have indeed.

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