Gentle Spirit
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2004-10-14
01:06 PM
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Cascade of rain in Autumn air breath of damp upon my skin sounds of nature everywhere brings soothing to restless within.
Colors splashing horizons view leaves tumble in gentle surround artistic touch of palette hues serene quiet, peace is found.
All is calm, life holds no worry while scampering to and fro creatures of nature work in hurry while wind of coming changes blow.
The rush and hush of mother earth blessing special seasons of birth.
The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love....
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CocoBaci
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2004-10-14
01:17 PM
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GS, this is precious... I very much enjoyed the read! *~coco*~
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Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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2004-10-14
02:22 PM
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Donna...
I've marked this a as it is one of your best, ever!Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...
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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-10-14
02:25 PM
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Your descriptions of Autumn and its feel cascade as pretty as your title.
Hugs - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
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2004-10-14
02:26 PM
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serene and soothing write...you carry the hush of the wind in your poetry...
**babygirL**
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Contabo
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since 2001-11-21
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2004-10-14
03:35 PM
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Autumn is DEFINITELY in the air.
Contabo
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Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
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South Carolina, USA
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2004-10-14
09:58 PM
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Donna, dear lady....I do love the feel of these words...such peace...thank you.
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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
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2004-10-15
01:07 AM
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Donna
Your words paint a most beautiful picture of my favourite season. I hope all is well in your life.
Take care.......SueI am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins
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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
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2004-10-15
11:45 AM
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Colors splashing horizons view leaves tumble in gentle surround artistic touch of palette hues serene quiet, peace is found.
This is a peaceful beauty dear Donna, as always I find warmth and comfort in your poetry.
Hugs~
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2004-10-15
12:57 PM
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you have got the spirit, for sure!
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Gentle Spirit
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2004-10-16
07:37 AM
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The colors of Autumn always hold such beauty for the beholder. It's hard not to be inspired by the sights and sounds. Thanks to all, luv and hugs...........The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love....
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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2004-10-16
12:41 PM
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GentlestOne~
'wind of coming changes blow'
I just love the sound of that ... applicable to many things~
Thank you for being such a gracious poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
Email noles1@totcon.com
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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
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2004-10-16
12:45 PM
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I especially enjoyed the line about the touch of the autumn rain.Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
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2004-10-16
01:45 PM
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Tranquil and calming. A lovely write from a lovely Spirit. A gentle write from a Gentle soul.
Even the title is poetic!
May your autumn be a glorious one!
Warm, autumnal hugs, Linda
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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
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2004-10-16
02:47 PM
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Donna, Autumn just happens to be my favotire season and you do it justice with your words Lovely
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Margherita
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Eternity
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2004-10-16
07:32 PM
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quote: The rush and hush of mother earth blessing special seasons of birth.
Absolutely charming write!
Love, Margherita
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NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
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2004-10-16
08:37 PM
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Donna, I am blown away by this piece. One delightful bit of writing.
Thank you so much for such an enjoyable read.
hugs, MartiA single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. –St. Francis of Assisi
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