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Heat…………………………Stroking
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Heat…………………………Stroking Hades humidity Sun-block gone Palms waving Oceans surfing But back In the Midwest Heat Strokes Living Chokes Call it kind Call it mine Summer Lives Eternity |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Midwest hot summers Humidity, thunderstorms Triple digit heat Nicely done! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Only you Soleil, can write of this as well as you do. Now, please call upon someone to turn up the AC just a little, please... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Heat....Stroking" ~ very clever Black Sun! Interesting presentation! It has been particularly hot and humid where I live as well ~ and visions of oceans surfing helps to cool me off! This heat makes minutes seem like an eternity!  EA P.S. Keep applying that sun-block! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great write -- I remember those humid, hot summers in the Miami Valley of Ohio -- oh yes, I remember! .....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir Interesting form, enjoyed. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
YESSS! It's fun to write that way, huh? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Cool! -- NOT! It's hot. And our AC just went out. Thank heaven for the neighbor's pool. Man have I been spoiled. Ah well, it's kinda' fun hangin' around in your underwear. Much enjoyed. -- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The presention and the words...inspired!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very well done...and what you describe takes it's toll on me in the winter, as I love the summer, the hotter the better. Oh, well, what can I say, when winter comes I hibernate? this was an awesome write...enjoyed. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Summer's great but I wish God would put on the air conditioner...  I come up with all kinds of excuses not to go out when it hits 90 or above here...If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Hades humidity Oh my, yes... *S* Now if only the living in it was as delightful as this read! *s* |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Yes, it's hovering in the mid 90's peaking out around the century mark and only going to get hotter and the humidity is as it normally is...outrageous. It's been averaging about 105 deg. in the factory I work at. Even at night. At 9 PM it was still 102 deg. in on the production floor. I'm starting to look better when I look in the mirror (sweatin' it off). Nice write. I really enjoyed it. It made me think of...well...here, actually. Kevin |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I really like the way you interlaced the voices. They fit together beautifully. misc'e |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Soleil !! So good to read you here!! Yes...summer sure is starting to sizzle. Love the presentation here! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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