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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City 
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let eternity burn an illusion of gray fugue on eyes that lost their way in the mists of love, hours shoved slowly into forever, severed from the core alleyways in the sore flesh and soul, let memory perish pithed in the cherished folly of a fool's desire, whose fire burned the dire sanctuary of sacred vows, into a liar's prison of beveled mirrors, immersed in dark liquor this love dissolves, like the taste of hasty faith dries on the rusty blades of trust, for only in grief is a ghost given bulk to bleed living silver from the honeysuckle marrow of a red tomorrow, and burn, for no words are eternal. 2004 copyright BabygirLPress |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whewww, tremendous use of words...captures such wonderful images...this had me through and through, and wanted more, more, more Maticulous write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
severed from the core alleyways in the sore flesh and soul, let memory perish pithed in the cherished folly of a fool's desire, whose fire burned the dire sanctuary of sacred vows, into a liar's prison of beveled mirrors, immersed in dark liquor this love dissolves, This is so very poignant, but so very well written. Enjoyed your words emmensley The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
babygirl, amazing lines: like the taste of hasty faith dries on the rusty blades of trust, |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Lee~thank you for the kind words... Gentle Spirit~thank you, my friend... Littlewing~thank you...the lines you quoted are the center sentiment in this piece...thanks for stopping in on it... **babygirL** |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
babygirl Your writing is amazing, the images fresh and alive with feeling. Much enjoyed! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you, Martie~ **babygirL** |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
like the taste of hasty faith dries on the rusty blades of trust Ahhh babygrl, it's lovely to read you again, the above lines stood out. So much is said in just those lines alone. Enjoyed. Maree  cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Maree~ thank you for stopping in on this... love&light, **babygirL** |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
vandana~ thank you! **babygirL** |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mind if I follow you around a bit and study? I LOVE WHAT YOU ARE DOING WITH WORDS!!! (I get excited.) eating this up, I am. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
LOL..serenity...be my guest...find me more "Behind Closed Dorrs"....lol...that's more my style... thanks for hitting this... **babygirL** |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
I like it. (which is good  )If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Indigo, thank you kindly! **babygirL** |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you, James! **babygirL** |
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