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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-10-13 10:29 AM

Flower photographs infecting
Legendary mosaic encounters
In mass migration, across open sea meadows
Leisurely fulsome language
Sea urchins
Possessing humor and free speech
Like a wish discussing muted tones of light
Or waves which become an entire ocean
Molecular fossils with dance partners
Handing out vacation grab bags
Made steeper by time
Eagerly resting to anchor
Throaty winks
Into green forests of firewood
Putting together daily puzzles
Your scent teases promise
Of my pirate waving his sword
Like natures entrepreneur
Lost time gains leggy visits
Each time longer then before
Ostrich plumes hone a silence
Of what we both knew and now know
Well groomed piracy
Dives deep into our mid-morning sunlight
Shaking our voices uncontrollably with joy tears
Muscled silver coins lay sunny side up
Swimming unto the sleeve of jasmine
Assuming no other hue
But the brilliance of spaces emerged
Unto composition
Like servants we reflect sweet sea breezes
Across the minds of self loving things
Wearing aprons and curtain swags
Warm gold plated mornings

written with a little encouragement from a fellow poet/friend
It's good to dream, isn't it?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-10-13 10:38 AM

When I read you, I feel as if I have entered
a private journey, with hieroglyphics on the walls...
always interesting, always a mystery...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2004-10-13 11:25 AM

ms lee j..the places you go
with your poetry camera
makes me want to bring
extra film. wonderful view here

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2004-10-13 11:45 AM

Needs more than one reading but initial response - "Wow!"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-10-13 01:11 PM

Wonderful read Lee...much enjoyed as always.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

5 posted 2004-10-13 01:40 PM

sure is good to dream...fantastic poem!

**babygirL**

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