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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-10-13 12:52 PM



Perhaps I Should Give It Time

Since unpacking my bags  
I have searched everywhere
My muse seems to have left
It does not appear to be there

I don't know where to begin
Feels like the loss of a friend
I remember the way we were
My muse I could once depend

Perhaps I should give it time
Every poet would understand
I had many a sleepless night
Hung in limbo with pen in hand

The writers still resides within
Going through those motions
Yet words can be hard to find
Caught up between emotions

While thoughts toss and turn
My self-doubt began to verse
With the midnight oil burning
Writers block became a curse

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1 posted 2004-10-13 01:15 AM


Maybe she went with you and is still unpacking her bags, or maybe she has gone to rest, as should you   Very cute Hope, and trust me they do go on vacations all the time.

~ Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self ~ Cyril Connolly
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Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-10-13 07:16 AM


Yes Hope, we can all relate to this.  The old saying been there, done that comes to mind.  She's just taking an extra long vacation and when she gets back you will be writing more than ever!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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