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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-10-11 09:04 PM



Chills ran up and down the spine
a faint hollow knock was heard.
All looked up from the dinner table
perplexed, there was short pause
as if the door would open by itself.

The hollow knock continued,
more distinct now...
a little soup spilt on a lap,
a host rose as they do to greet
on the other side of the door
who might one meet...

A darkened shroud floated into the room
the guests have already responded to charades
already celebrated as the harvest was made
this would be another audacious reaper
although somewhat drab at the hem-line

From under the dark hood comes,
"I've come to collect my harvest",
one of the guests teases
"I just gave at the office, so beat it".

"I've come to collect my due",
echos from the vacant shroud.
To this there is a clutter of cutlery
each guest is now less teased...
more concerned, even worried
that the visitor should insist...

They scan each others face for solace
the last time they'd enjoy pumpkin pie..
"we haven't yet finished our meal
please sit and be patient",
replied one too brave
for his own good.

To which the reaper pointed his scythe
and one of the guests vanished from sight.




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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-11 09:25 PM


A chilling dinner party, Martin.
Maybe don't answer the door?

ecrivan
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2 posted 2004-10-11 09:31 PM


maybe, but they did so in a Monty Python film..dark humour though, somebody slumped into his soup...


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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-10-11 09:33 PM


Bolt the door and board up the windows Martin!!
Now I'm going to have nightmares!!!


Just kidding....I loved this!!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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