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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-10-10 04:16 PM



A childhood trauma crept in
the father passed away
mother went to work
foundations swayed


a dream pictured the house ablaze
it was where we had all been raised
was a sign that stuctures give into change
begin to fathom the dreams interpretive range


the child grew to adult and forgot
the initial trauma and its sequential shock
forgetful of family events and parental matters
families may reunite once they're in tatters...


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-10-11 07:56 PM


perhaps
ecrivan
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my own state
2 posted 2004-10-11 09:33 PM


now I have to something on remember...hehe


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