Open Poetry #33 |
wrap-around |
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
wrap-around there have been nights longer than this one they spill into your days 3 hours back with afternoon tea at dawn at least we share some of it together me in my waking and you in your wrap-around i hold you tight and cradle you with in the hollow of my eyes - - dream after dream to find your feet behind chairs with toes in jazz two steps forward one step back over-board and how i would sit cross-legged on the floor for you and wash the dust from them cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows ~ani difranco~ [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (10-11-2004 08:06 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always enjoy the pieces of your life |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Such a personal sweet feeling to this piece of your heart. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
interesting feel to this - like a tap dance done to jazz - like Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful images bella |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Gorgeous poem luscious you *tossing roses* |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
oh, niiiice...your visions stir colors and emotions...lovely stuff... **babygirL** |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I saw you there, sitting Maree and I wrapped my own feet behind the chair as I read. beautiful. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know this was for someone else, but change the hours slightly... and I smile... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey Dixie, thank you. Martie, I always enjoy your replies, I thank you. Susan, Thanks for stopping by Appreciate it so much. Bellooo, glad you thought so thanks M'lady? thank you...tossing kisses Sue, Thank you, I can see you doing that. Karilea? and I'm smiling too, I thank you. cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"and wash the dust from them" cant stop smiling this now this is romantic (and bittersweet and all that stuff too) |
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