Open Poetry #33 |
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Blue-Eyed Blooms |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The day was spelling In the synergy that flowed beneath our boat, a tales telling Just barely on the surfaces of fragile tongues When all my eyes could veil but the feelings inside me And words fought actions in confusing myth Never touching the water…yet we were…undeniably wet Sprayed by October rains, and tender tears of vacant years And the day was perfect in its weep and flitter, intermittent drab and glitter As we stepped around the real feel The wind colder, we stopped to navigate the scale from skate As passers by assumed us to be we, a picture of twin harmony That I could not remain within the confines of a warming seat To leave you in the wind preparing skim, fillet of dinner all and in Astir, that brought me into focus as it were, so well a shadow for your shell That moved us both together, as my body braced the weather from your back I could feel the knowing glowing all throughout you…all about you Every molecule was fused in conversations rations lacked As the warm of me found refuge all along your manly shape Opening my arms to winter wear the warmth of summers cape And I floated there in touching, yet not touching Breathing, in the wonder said of nothing In it’s silence much too bold to be ignored Shaken in your soul of every tuned and noted chord That my mind roamed into open fields of you The blue-eyed blooms renew A resonance without a clue That warms my life the inside through Copyright Kkh 10/10/04 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
That my mind roamed into open fields of you The blue-eyed blooms renew A resonance without a clue That warms my life the inside through o,those blue eyed blooms resonate through the seasons once you've seen them through your own eyes |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Oh my ... what utter beauty~ 'And words fought actions in confusing myth Never touching the water…yet we were…undeniably wet Sprayed by October rains, and tender tears of vacant years And the day was perfect in its weep and flitter, intermittent drab and glitter' AND THIS .... 'Breathing, in the wonder said of nothing' *sighs* *sighs* *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply lovely...enjoyable read |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing it with us ![]() and then He created the horse... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for sharing this world you see |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah so beautiful Kathleen....splendid! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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