Open Poetry #33 |
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Only We two upon this Earth |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal ![]() |
if only it were you and i the only two upon this earth standing beneath the jealous sky warmed with sun’s golden burst would you take me into your arms wrapped within your warrior’s cloak and kiss me as if no morrow comes and only today is spoken? drink of me as if a wine from lips of rose soft petal ease the bitter of sorrow’s brine and taste of healing nectar hold me close as if to weld into one we shall be woven the whole of me shall be beheld from within your soul sweet haven lay with me upon summer’s lea this soft green bed of Eden take me now down passion’s way gifting bliss’ sweet found freedom soar with me to the heights above as if of celestial flight bidden for none do move me as you, my love within our self made heaven s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. [This message has been edited by Susan (10-10-2004 06:28 PM).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I've always said when two find a real love and get lost in each other, the world does disappear. Very nice thoughts behind this and a pleasure to read. Enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, but the heaven that we make is magical. Wonderful write Susan. TD |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Nice read Susan, but is the word "marrow" intentional or am I reading it wrong. :-) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Time Prophet - oooopsie - it's morrow. Thanks for your replies - dear friends - much appreciated and hugs to you all - ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms susan...what wine is more worthy of the kiss than that wine of love it quenches the parch of lonely lips and glistens the smile in desire's eyes this knight is blessed with your gift now where is my darned dragon costume... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Dark - you make me smile - thank you- ![]() Dragon costume - hehe Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
magical Susan, and beautiful. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling at you* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Donna - ![]() And Dixie - smiling backatcha ![]() love you guys - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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