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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-10-10 04:12 PM



if only it were you and i
the only two upon this earth
standing beneath the jealous sky
warmed with sun’s golden burst
would you take me into your arms
wrapped within your warrior’s cloak
and kiss me as if no morrow comes
and only today is spoken?

drink of me as if a wine
from lips of rose soft petal
ease the bitter of sorrow’s brine
and taste of healing nectar
hold me close as if to weld
into one we shall be woven
the whole of me shall be beheld
from within your soul sweet haven

lay with me upon summer’s lea
this soft green bed of Eden
take me now down passion’s way
gifting bliss’ sweet found freedom
soar with me to the heights above
as if of celestial flight bidden
for none do move me as you, my love
within our self made heaven

s.a.t.


Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

[This message has been edited by Susan (10-10-2004 06:28 PM).]

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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2004-10-10 04:19 PM


I've always said when two find a real love and get lost in each other, the world does disappear.  Very nice thoughts behind this and a pleasure to read.  Enjoyed.
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2004-10-10 05:25 PM


Oh, but the heaven that we make is magical.
Wonderful write Susan.
TD

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30
Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees
3 posted 2004-10-10 05:59 PM


Nice read Susan, but is the word "marrow" intentional or am I reading it wrong. :-)
Susan
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-10-10 06:29 PM


Thanks Time Prophet - oooopsie - it's morrow.

Thanks for your replies - dear friends - much appreciated and hugs to you all -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2004-10-10 09:23 PM


ms susan...what wine is more worthy
of the kiss than that wine of love
it quenches the parch of lonely lips
and glistens the smile in desire's eyes
this knight is blessed with your gift

now where is my darned dragon costume...



Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-10-10 10:10 PM


Dark - you make me smile - thank you-

Susan

Dragon costume - hehe

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2004-10-11 03:14 PM


magical Susan, and beautiful.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
8 posted 2004-10-11 07:23 PM


*smiling at you*
Susan
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2004-10-11 08:10 PM


Thank you Donna -

And Dixie - smiling backatcha

love you guys - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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