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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-10-10 02:48 PM



air swirling in energy
there goes a thought
another program running
piano blue ...baby grand electric vibes
listen deep into the night
hear the sounds of little minds sleeping
drifting in a hand full of wisdom
small amounts fall from the trees
years freeze
snow is the soul of the winter
my return to the mountains
the caverns of stone and ice
shimmer in the fires light
lone wolf howling at the moon and stars
as the lake closes across like frosted glass
north winds seal it in time


......
JDWIII
10/2004

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-10-10 03:11 PM


Just gorgeous!
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-10-10 03:18 PM


margherita

thanks

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3 posted 2004-10-10 04:11 PM


Especially loved the "as the lake closes"...
That gradual ice cap sealing the secrets of it's depths until the spring thaw...until it is time again to know...

You are really rockin today Maestro.
TD

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4 posted 2004-10-10 04:22 PM



Very much enjoyed this one, especially the following

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listen deep into the night
hear the sounds of little minds sleeping
drifting in a hand full of wisdom
small amounts fall from the trees
years freeze

aujussy wolf
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5 posted 2004-10-10 05:16 PM


TD, on a roll
thanks babe
~J

..

Mark ....great fav lines
glad you enjoyed this one too

thanks again

Susan
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6 posted 2004-10-10 06:32 PM


Mmmm, the feel of the wild, the chill of winter, the essence of the wolf, all vibing to a tune- I like

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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7 posted 2004-10-10 06:57 PM


fills the senses...I especially like the "drifting in a hand full of wisdom" line, but do wonder if you wanted it to be two words particularly or not...instead of handful. Just curious.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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8 posted 2004-10-10 07:40 PM


Susan ... perfect reply thanks
Vas .... lol thanks and it was ment
to be 2 seperate words to answer you question ...
HOWL
~wolf

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9 posted 2004-10-10 08:23 PM


snow is the soul of the winter
my return to the mountains
the caverns of stone and ice
shimmer in the fires light ''''


what an image of winter, the caverns of ice....indeed hugssss you

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
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10 posted 2004-10-10 08:33 PM


awww greeneyes your so sweet,
thanks hon , luv the hugss   
lots of hugssss back at ya babe
~wolfy

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11 posted 2004-10-10 11:08 PM


oooo.feel this in my toes...

lovely...

*babygirL**

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12 posted 2004-10-10 11:29 PM


in the toes even hahaa
thats a first babygirl
much luv
~wolf

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