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MovesInSilence
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 111
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2004-10-10 07:40 AM

You said you would be there when I needed you
You said no matter what was going on I could call you
I cried your name and got no answer
I cried out for help and still no reply
It’s not that you’re ignoring my pleas
It’s I have seen you happy for the first time
Your world looks so complete
Your face smiles like never before
Who am I to bring you down
Who am I to share my pain with you
It is true I am your friend
And that's why I sit in silence

It's not the blindfold that blinds you,
it's the person that puts it there.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2004-10-10 07:52 AM

oh this is quite a sad write - I hope your friendship remains strong and solid - we need to be happy for our friend's happiness
Enjoyed the read - be well, be you!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-10-10 08:00 AM

hey there L, this is quite sad, hope all is ok with you.

Love the pic by the way

Maree.

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-10-10 08:32 AM

Sad yes, but you are right, sometimes to remain in silence is the greatest gift of true unconditional love and friendship.

The skies will brighten.

Well written and meaningful.

Love, Margherita

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-10-10 10:34 AM

It is hard - silence. The word sounds so soft, but in truth, it often screams. I am sorry for this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-10-17 10:49 PM

perception can be a tricky thing....
and its amazing how many variations there are in a smile...

dont ever assume
just keep trying...keep pushing through...
no one is ever too happy to help a friend

this hurts buddy, good to see you write it out.

MovesInSilence
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 111
Perth, Australia

6 posted 2004-10-18 12:33 PM

Sometimes writing it out makes more sense later. When things are back to normal.

I hate emotional rollercoaster rides

But it's strange how some of the best poetry comes either from the depths of despair or the emotional highs.

Thank you all for replying to my poem.

(Needed it)

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