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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-10-08 02:58 AM


(forgive me lovie)

Too much t'do
in quartered fourths
NOW before the
one yard line
Passing's suicidal
yet running out of time
inev--it's able that we tend
to hand off balls we like to think
are our mirrored selves in sync
dancing heroes under goals.


*  *  *

Um..consider the source, folks,

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-10-08 03:02 AM


Loved the analogy, Karen!  Good one.   ......jojo
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-10-08 03:41 AM


yep
Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2004-10-08 06:25 AM


hmmmmmmm...

seems a lot of "football" writing going on...

Karen..sometimes, just once in a blue moon, passing that crap off is the right thing to do..

we don't always have what should be ours...therefore we need to pass it to who it really belongs to...

and maybe I am being too serious...lol

love you lady!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-10-08 06:31 AM


Aahhh about football?

right...

"one yard lines , quartered fourths, under goals"

I see it now. heh.


m'lady

Mxx

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-10-08 07:32 AM


tremendous write...enjoyed a lot
Duncan
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6 posted 2004-10-08 08:01 AM


Good Morning K!!  Little early for football, but I'll take a cup of coffee if you can spare some...  

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2004-10-08 08:18 AM


serenity,
Football a very tiring game. LOL

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2004-10-08 08:35 AM


Does this mean the tear away jerseys are coming back?

Wonderful exposure this morning.  Thank you

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-10-08 09:37 AM


yep its that time of year again....lol...
tear away jerseys.....lol....
sometimes tear away jerseys could be fun...
oops....did I say that...
sorry....lmao....
enjoyed K.

littlewing
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10 posted 2004-10-08 01:19 PM


love the inevitable, nice play there Karen.
It sounds to me as if you just watched the Bills/Patriots game . . .
*ducking from flying tomatoes*

*grin*

Susan
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walking the surreal
11 posted 2004-10-08 02:39 PM


Not being a foot ball fan, I could still appreciate the analogy - enjoyed

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

VAS
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12 posted 2004-10-08 03:58 PM


hehehe

I tho't it was about TIME


LOL

but it's about life td's and penalties

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

brian sites
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usa
13 posted 2004-10-09 12:00 PM


I wish I could make jokes about the Saints
sigh

my team is worse....

blah
(grin)

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