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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-10-07 04:34 PM



I have forgotten
what it feels like to be valued
when loving someone
is mere words in heart
not accepted
and understated
and so it goes...
a voice to be quieted
and dreams to be lost
and rain...
the order of the day

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with you
1 posted 2004-10-07 07:04 PM


"I have forgotten
what it feels like to be valued"

in a much different tone....me too...with two teens and a preteen? sheesh...apparently I walk around all day with a sign on my head that reads, "stupid"

*hugs* to you

devinechild22
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2 posted 2004-10-07 07:14 PM


So sad.... Feels like you're missing a piece of yourself when there's no one there.


~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

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