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Open Poetry #33

The Moment I Knew I Loved You

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2004-10-06 08:03 PM

I love that stupid necklace
Cheap and tacky
That dangles down
Over your mac & cheese
That you annoyingly spear
So hard that your fork
Clanks on the plate.
I love how you look up at me
And smile
With cheese between your teeth
As I stifle my laughter
Because you didn't notice.
And I hate the way
That after all this time
I still love you for that.

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

[This message has been edited by devinechild22 (10-06-2004 09:59 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-10-06 09:12 PM

at that 'cheesey' image

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-10-06 09:54 PM

Yes, I agree, what an image..and I am
smiling at you for how you gave us the
images of this...excellent. One word
might be stifle...(checking my dictionary)..

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2004-10-06 10:01 PM

Thanks for the replies... Thanks for the correction Magnus... I didn't even notice!

*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-10-06 10:07 PM

Ahhh I love this.
Great when there are little odd things our loved ones do
and we don't care..in fact love them even more for it.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-07 12:38 PM

Smiling here -

what a delight-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-10-07 12:53 PM

Nice...James

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

7 posted 2004-10-07 07:10 PM

Thanks for all the positive replies guys. Much appreciated.

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

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