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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-10-05 06:59 PM

maybe.
because
the extraordinary is exaggerated.
the chromic taste
overwhelmed by
paranoiac run
and scream
laden
by the sound
of realized normality.
maybe.
the reason splashed
in bits
unrecognizable for
hunters.
and victims
enjoying
adrenaline rush.
tragedy or triumph
praised alone without
comparison.
maybe.
end
starving for mockery
and ironic tears.
creature
wings
white feathers
under
cinder gray.
maybe.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-10-05 07:15 PM

Maybe.

Great thoughts here pandanov.

Enjoyed, I like your style

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2004-10-05 10:31 PM

I'm not sure if I should say this or not... but this is just what I needed to read tonight... Your words refocused a churning mind... and sent it on a better path of maybes...

I always like your work... I thank you for this one. *S*

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2004-10-06 12:32 PM

Guilty, your honor.... Guilty as charged.

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-10-06 04:28 AM

awesome

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

5 posted 2004-10-06 06:09 AM

thank you all. you guys are so good to my poetic attempts.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2004-10-06 07:22 AM

interesting

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-10-06 07:38 AM

maybe is a diverse word, which shelters us sometimes from making desission, b/c we tend to play a personal game with self, trying to bend our own issues in our behalf, even when we know something is not good for us...defining actual left and right controversy within...we can argue with that and bend it to our own desires, even when we know it might be wrong or right for us...
Maybe to, is also an emotion which is patient and allowing...adding harmony and growth, depending on the issue...

Due to each our own intellectual abilities, moral emotions...conditioning, we may find adverse complexities which can be fine tuned if willing and redefined into a grooming of our own personal behavior.

I found this write, exceptionally thought provoking...good one! Thank you for sharing.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2004-10-07 09:33 AM

Your poetic attempts are so good to us....you're truly unique.

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