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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-09-29 03:04 PM

Trees singing
Waving in my tiny mind
Of visions passed
To dance
Swaying
In our life
Of grass delightfully tucked
As Momma never meant
As we spent some time
On the ground
Mispent
In counting our blessings
Of a hair
To dangle
On a face
To wrangle
Another embrace
To dance with magic eyes
To live
To strive
After
The words
Of your eyes

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-09-29 03:16 PM

To wrangle
Another embrace
To dance with magic eyes
To live
To strive
After
The words
Of your eyes

Yep, sometimes the eyes say everything that doesn't need to be said. Enjoyed.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

2 posted 2004-09-29 09:07 PM

Yes the eyes can tell a magical story.
Another beauty.
BonBon

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2004-10-04 01:56 PM

magical write, Dave; your work is quickly filling my shelves.
miscellanea

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-10-05 06:23 AM

yes, wishing those magic eyes would stay for the duration, growing in reality, taking the couple by their hearts and showing them each other as they are...dancing within the sorrows together as well, claiming fidelity to one another.

This is a beautiful vision, wishing everyone could appreciate the substance of each other as time wears on...

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-10-05 12:12 PM

Great write Dave!

Eric

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2004-10-05 04:16 PM

this one touched me deeply
always enjoy your wise words sir

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2004-10-05 08:43 PM

Oh I really like this.

Maree

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-10-06 04:54 AM

a great write indeed

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2004-10-07 09:52 AM

As we spent some time
On the ground
Mispent
In counting our blessings
Of a hair
To dangle
On a face
To wrangle
Another embrace
To dance with magic eyes
To live
To strive
After
The words
Of your eyes

Oh, yes... I like this very much... *S*

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