Open Poetry #33 |
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A Stitch In Time |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Silver, finely etched....timeless gift. A mother’s thimble, bearing the scars of countless stitches. Ragged holes delicately closed, a surgeon’s touch. A woven bastion now standing where a toe once escaped the confines of smooth cotton. Such love which gently wove the weave, a smile covering eyes that viewed the struggle of a child’s dance amongst the flowers. Countless times a thimble has shored the breech. Giving a reprieve to a heel once closed, exposed and yet again methodically shut against the elements of the earth. And now, somewhere amongst threads, needles, paraffin blocks, a worn pair of black handled scissors. Somewhere amongst this isolated and oft forgotten memorabilia lies the warrior’s helmet, a silver thimble....hoping to again shore the breech and stem the flow of childish toes...to never be forgotten or left to lie alone, waiting to again see a mother’s smiling eyes. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very cool write. Memories do carry a strong current in the beat of our hearts and soul. I believe as time goes on, certain ones actually become stronger and more vivid. You bring to us some very wonderful images and loving memories. Nicely done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Somewhere amongst this isolated and oft forgotten memorabilia lies the warrior’s helmet, a silver thimble....hoping to again shore the breech and stem the flow of childish toes...to never be forgotten or left to lie alone, waiting to again see a mother’s smiling eyes." Wonderful write Barry... I can recall my mother darning socks... thank you for the remember. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Barry - You write of such ordinary, and with your talent, it becomes extraordinary - heart warming, comforting, beautiful - ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, A touching write, to shed some light upon the grace of rose and lace. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry, so very! I have a thimble that belonged to my mother, and it is just like that! Thank you for this beautiful cherish! ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
heartwarming write.. ![]() enjoyed! hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This brought back so many memories... a little girl dreamed of the day she'd join the group settled around the quilting frame for the patterns those flashing needles painted fascinated me so. *S* Enjoyed much! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
for me too, memories |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very nice |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very touching Barry.... ~~*~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful and touching Barry. ![]() |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
feeling the quicksilver in this...lovely **babygirL** |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
As a mother, this one makes me think of how the little things I do make a difference; speak of love to my children. Thank you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we are molded by our memories...some good, some not so good, and yet always weaving us into change...brilliant write...loved this thank you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful. (and I love that picture!) "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'll be damned!! Look at that pic...it's Walker...Texas Ranger!!!! |
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