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ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2004-10-05 12:21 PM



I can't stand it any longer.....being alone
I just want to call you but my hand won't pick up the phone
I can see us together in my dreams but when I see you in reality I'm ripped apart at the seams
This not knowing is killing me, not being able to feel your touch
If only you knew that I miss you so much
I need you more than you need me because I finally will admit:  I'm hopelessly in love you
But if you and I aren't meant to be please tell me so I can be free

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msrascalx
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since 2004-09-25
Posts 15
Conway, SC
1 posted 2004-10-05 12:23 PM


Do I ever know the feeling. Great work.
MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-10-05 03:23 PM


omg i know this too well
a feeling that never seems to go away


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