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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-10-04 09:51 PM


Curled up on my bed with Freud
Is this what he had in mind?
as I munch my vegemite
and wrinkle up my nose to keep
the focals, bi, in such aspect
pondering the death of me
beyond the pleasure principle
as I stroke a furry Fred
with his throat exposed
I'm led
to think of him
and his instinct
to kill the stuffed koala there
staring at the (bear?) with greed...

"koowee-kah!"
I throttle throat
like a bird of rarity
witnessed in the wild I am
appreciative of kindly beast
"Fred, it's not a rat," I said
as Annie warmed my back, I laughed
at the way dogs look at me
when I become unleashed.


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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-04 10:02 PM


ROTFL, and as the cat's hair stands on end...
funny, I thought I actually heard that holler

Aenimal
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2 posted 2004-10-04 10:27 PM


I laughed
at the way dogs look at me
when I become unleashed.

i get those looks from people too

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-10-04 10:40 PM


"I laughed
at the way dogs look at me
when I become unleashed."

Ser?  How much of that stuff you bin eatin' gal?

Love ya lady...yer too funny!

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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4 posted 2004-10-04 10:48 PM


Holy Vegemite Mate!  Very cute!
Martie
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5 posted 2004-10-04 11:02 PM


serenity

No wonder you are so beloved by so many!  Pssss...is vegamite really good?  Maree said she would send me some too....


Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2004-10-04 11:10 PM


"like a bird of rarity
witnessed in the wild I am
appreciative of kindly beast"
***************************
rarity?  Need maybe to veg a while and mate instead of veg with all your mite.  Rare gem I would say, but let us not become extinct.  

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with you
7 posted 2004-10-04 11:12 PM


"I'm led
to think of him
and his instinct
to kill the stuffed koala there
staring at the (bear?) with greed..."

grinning...enjoyed this peek



inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2004-10-04 11:17 PM


you have a way
of making a bite feel good

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9 posted 2004-10-04 11:20 PM


She is sweet...and you are sweetly understanding.

Psst....Martie....no -- it's horrible! It tastes like the inside of a yogurt maker's shoe......

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Dark Angel
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10 posted 2004-10-05 04:24 AM


Oh you! What a lovely surprise.  You're gorgeous yanno? and so is this poem.

You blow me away.

You get em dogs away from lil Koowee lol.

Thank you so much M'lady.



Mxx

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

littlewing
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11 posted 2004-10-05 08:33 AM


K,

they only recognize one of their own,
primal, I mean . .  
*grin*

I love what Michele said, sooooo true!

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2004-10-05 01:56 PM


*chuckle*

At times my bed is fairly crowded--

despite my impromptu war cries and Yoko imitations.

Thanks for reading as I rather enjoyed writing this'n.

Hugs and love to all of you.

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