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msrascalx Junior Member
since 2004-09-25
Posts 15Conway, SC |
Left in this house we once called a home you moved on to find a new place to call your own the loneliness is so unbearable I feel like I could die Left here to keep things going in an unreal situation You say you’ll keep in touch so I will always know you care But all I get is a phone call a day And a promise that you care You say you’ll write to tell me your near I wait by the mail box but nothing comes here I want my house turned back into a home |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Vickie, Welcome to Passions! I hope you enjoy your stay here. I hope everything works out for you. Good Work. Keep it up! Take Care, Laura |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a sad write Vickie...very well expressed. Nicely done! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely write and welcome! Looking forward to reading more of you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lots of longing here in this piece. Just as you stated, a home isn't really a home with the apple from the pie is missing. Enjoyed the write. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Lonely... hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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msrascalx Junior Member
since 2004-09-25
Posts 15Conway, SC |
Thank you all for the kind words. Its is not a home unless the person you love is there to share it with you. Since Jeff (rascalx) took a job out of town, things get hard sometimes and I miss him so much. But thank the Gods he is coming home soon and he's going to find a job closer to home. |
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