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Open Poetry #33

Another place

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2004-07-13 07:24 AM

Met within a world touch could never reach
Passed emotions through words typed out
Spoken words couldn’t tempt us this time
You typed “I love you”
Didn’t I type “I love you too”?
Felt something stir along my streams of feelings
Butterflies escaped their hidden cages
We were in a world of love no-one knew of
But in the end it shattered before us
If it had been another place
Our love would still be going strong
And memories wouldn’t haunt us…

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-07-13 12:56 PM

if only...*sigh*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-07-15 02:30 AM

Enjoyed...James

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2004-07-15 01:56 PM

I couldn't help but slow down when I read this. You captured that feeling so well.
misc'e

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-07-15 01:59 PM

Right to the point! Enjoyed the read.

JL

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-07-15 02:00 PM

sigh, beautifully done, but bittersweet

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