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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-10-03 07:35 PM

Your words wear
As fine leather
Soft and supple
Hugging my curves
In perfect fit

Tracing sublime lines divinely

You whisper soft
Tempting innuendos
Tattoo tastes
Of river run ink
Painting me pretty

Tracing sublime lines divinely

You touch tender
With fingertip verse
Slow slip passion
Silk flowing syllables
Draping in velvet

Tracing sublime lines divinely

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

klm
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 58
New Orleans, Atlanta

1 posted 2004-10-03 08:24 PM

simply beautiful.

The true poet writes to express, not impress.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2004-10-04 04:55 AM

Susan - imagery galore! thanks for sharing Bella!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

3 posted 2004-10-04 05:43 AM

Sensuous and song-like...a feathery softness. Lovely work.

Robert Joseph

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-10-04 06:19 AM

Very beautiful, Susan
Hugs,
Ethel

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2004-10-04 08:00 AM

ms susan
how the wind
paints a lady
with cellophane
so does the eyes
of a lover

kewl stuff ms,
he is lucky

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-10-04 10:03 AM

Thank you friends - for your kindness - my heart is warmed, truly.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-10-04 02:53 PM

You have a uniquely expressive style of writing that I very much enjoy reading!

Love & Light,
Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-10-04 02:55 PM

Breathtaking!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-10-04 02:55 PM

Thank you Linda - as I also enjoy your work and the smiles it brings.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-10-04 06:00 PM

Mmmm thank you Nancy - you gift me a smile.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-10-07 02:36 AM

pretty...yes

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2004-10-07 10:47 AM

You touch tender
With fingertip verse
Slow slip passion
Silk flowing syllables
Draping in velvet

The best kind of poetry. *S* Excellent! *S*

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2004-10-07 10:51 AM

I'd have hated to miss this, so I am glad it came back up. This is pure lovely poetic treasures!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2004-10-07 11:22 AM

Susan~
Just doesn't get much prettier than these toughts~

*SIGH*

You pen such delicate perfection~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

15 posted 2004-10-07 03:10 PM

Mmmmm - you all so very kind and my heart is warmed - thank you ever so-

Hugs all -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

16 posted 2004-10-08 10:20 PM

Belle poeme vous cadeau le lecteur Susan. I mean that from the bottom of my heart. It was a joy to read this and I must confess I am jealous I did not write this one. LOL!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

17 posted 2004-10-09 10:52 AM

EV2 - if only I knew what it is that you said

- but it looks like it must be very nice - you make me smile - thank you.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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