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kaile
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0 posted 2004-10-03 07:43 AM


I lean out
the window to
take in
the orangeness
of the unobstructed sun

I find that
if I lean a certain angle,
I can catch its reflection
from the glass pane

I shift my eyes
from one sun to the other
and think
"How lucky I am"


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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-10-03 10:51 AM


I love your joyous play with the sun.

It's beautiful!

Yes we are lucky!

Love, Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-10-03 12:16 PM


you doubled your joy that way
dgvarner
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3 posted 2004-10-03 10:32 PM


How lucky you are...

And how lucky I am to read this tonight!  

Always a joy to read you friend Kaile!

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

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