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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Summer is fading softly and Autumn brings with it mixed emotions... Distance and echoes of yesterday weigh heavy on my heart as a sigh held for too long I remember too much this time of year and find, ‘why’ is almost a constant upon my lips it’s never more than a whisper regret isn’t pretty when screamed..... Soon I will find my footing here in the fallen leaves and know once again how good it feels to exhale.... ~SEA~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA Words of wisdom, a delight to read. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Soon I will find my footing here in the fallen leaves and know once again how good it feels to exhale.... Grand  its that time of the year again ~J |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan: you are in me head, missy: I remember too much this time of year and find, ‘why’ is almost a constant upon my lips it’s never more than a whisper regret isn’t pretty when screamed..... amazing writing |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely beautiful and the touch of autumnal melancholy makes me sigh. Love, Margherita |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Waiting to exhale. I loved it, SEA. Billy 8) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Vissually and expressively rewarding...Lovely work! Robert Joseph |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you, each of you, so very much...I don't get as much time in here anymore so it means a lot to me that you took the time to read and reply...*hugs* |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Very effective and visually inspiring piece. Your imagery is really very astounding. I could feel the Autumn breezes gently swirl around my heart as I read this lovely and enchanting piece. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sea.. soon sounds so.......... exciting can't hardly wait to see what it brings enjoyed this much |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Soon I will find my footing here in the fallen leaves and know once again how good it feels to exhale.... *************** Positive and clear. Very nice write and holds deep meaning. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful write Susan... So good to read you once again. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Susan - this speaks deeply to my heart -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*hugs* it's funny how a certain time of year can do that to a person and then He created the horse... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Autumn seems to be the time for taking stock and remembering the past. Love, Joyce |
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