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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-10-03 12:43 PM


Never Let Her Go (Bali)

It was her idea to come
to Bali, not mine,
but now that we're here,
I love it my dear, I'm
having a wonderful time.
Those stars, those beautiful
stars, really brighten up
the Bali skies, and the silvery
moon, reflecting upon the ocean
from our hotel room, provides me
the light needed to look into
my sweethearts eyes.
And from her look, I know all
that I need to know, I know
that I want to be with her
and never let her go.

JamesLee
October02
2004

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1 posted 2004-10-03 01:12 AM


*sigh*
complete sweetness

Ivy Rose
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2 posted 2004-10-03 01:30 AM


JamesMichael...This is about the most beautiful love poem that I have ever read from your capable hands. Great work!!!
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3 posted 2004-10-03 02:02 AM


James...this poem is so exquisite, I enjoyed reading it so much.

~Alli~

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4 posted 2004-10-03 02:21 AM


right from the heart
nice work James
~W

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5 posted 2004-10-03 04:55 AM


Ahhhhh ..... you just made me see the Bali skies and the eyes of love.

Love is the way ....

A delight!

Love, Margherita

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6 posted 2004-10-03 05:33 AM


you always make me smile
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7 posted 2004-10-03 05:38 AM


yes, you make me smile too James! Great write Bello!!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

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