Open Poetry #33 |
Never Gonna Let Her Go |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Never Let Her Go (Bali) It was her idea to come to Bali, not mine, but now that we're here, I love it my dear, I'm having a wonderful time. Those stars, those beautiful stars, really brighten up the Bali skies, and the silvery moon, reflecting upon the ocean from our hotel room, provides me the light needed to look into my sweethearts eyes. And from her look, I know all that I need to know, I know that I want to be with her and never let her go. JamesLee October02 2004 |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sigh* complete sweetness |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
JamesMichael...This is about the most beautiful love poem that I have ever read from your capable hands. Great work!!! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
James...this poem is so exquisite, I enjoyed reading it so much. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
right from the heart nice work James ~W |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahhhhh ..... you just made me see the Bali skies and the eyes of love. Love is the way .... A delight! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always make me smile |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, you make me smile too James! Great write Bello!! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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