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Wearied Lamb
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Wearied Lamb |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Silence bathes the brow of wearied lamb as softness soaks the still lip. Carried toward the ocean breeze, the tides swaying inwardly against the rivers ebb. Rising peacefully upon the waves of morn...awaiting the rise of golden sun Where lies the comfort of heart when torrents rage the inner of self? When storms clashing the granite facade weaken the resolve... Lie still ‘pon the carpet green, bask within the glow of noonday swirl. Let not the swirling winds furrow the weathered brow...for thou art with me....Thy rod and thy staff... shall comfort me... Will they? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Barry - my dearest Sir - I am so happy to see you back upon the fields of blue - but oh, such a sorrowful post - sweet poet friend. This aches -  susanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wonder the same |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The answer eludes, but you sure are welcome. TD |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lie still ‘pon the carpet green, bask within the glow of noonday swirl. Let not the swirling winds furrow the weathered brow...for thou art with me....Thy rod and thy staff... shall comfort me... *********************** There lies the answer to it all. A recline in the meadow with eyes and soul skyward can calm even the most turbulent storms even if just for a brief rest. Excellent write and the flow and content superior. Like the images I saw when reading as well which is always a sign of a good penning. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...awesome write! Eric |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Dear Barry: In my experience, yes, they will. Wonderful to read you again, my friend. I am a bit the weary lamb. But I do find comfort for I know where to find my peace. I love this! You reminded me to give thanks for His comfort. Patricia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, this is sad ... but it contains hope even in the final question ... Very beautiful, dear Barry. Love, Margherita |
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