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A Conversation with Yesterday
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A Conversation with Yesterday |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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A Conversation with Yesterday She looked familiar, I thought, as we spoke of likenesses that bound us in a conversation of passion, perhaps more fittingly, compulsion, of promise to bring truths to page by pen. Though I had always relied upon my hand to speak my mind, I now found no words to describe her light which shown divinely upon truths I thought were buried long ago with master artisans of the word. I have traveled this Earth many more years than she but her promise was closer at hand. Adolescent innocence could not claim naiveté for in her I read the unconditional wisdom of prophets In youth, it seems, Lesser to be understood than the reader to understand. It was then I remembered her… She as me- Then... With a desire to be she again. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh WOW Patricia...this is beautiful and so are you  Maree. It's a  Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
The rediscovery of youth. I've had so many of these "flashbacks". Loved it! coyotyl  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
She still dwells within you .... A very beautiful conversation, dear Patricia! Who started it? It was her who reminded you of who you are ... A beautiful soul. Love, Margherita |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
reminds me of conversations with my daughters... I am enjoying watching them discover who they are, what they want, and missing just a bit, when it was my turn...( at the same time realizing, my mom is still watching me learn who I am)  enjoyed this very much. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Truly enjoyed this....I have sat in your chair countless times, with the same thoughts and feelings...IF only, huh? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so good to read you again! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is a great write Patricia - enjoyed! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Earnest and reflective...very well written! Robert Joseph |
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