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spaces laces inbetween (for maree)
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spaces laces inbetween (for maree) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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a pear an ache of nothing spaced with no eyes to tell the whys hair in pull of second lace tilting clover grouping this shoulders laxing in release defeat with arms of starch in cross I preach a pit serenity certainly with legs carresed she's dressed her best carved into wood with wires bending freedom bent into something more or less staring with no eye. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sighhh Karen? You've described her perfectly and i'm absolutely delighted with where you've placed her, just there, in stare of you. *softly smiling* Thank you for this precious gift m'lady. I love you  maree (wuwm) Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good and fine writing..thank you Goldenrose. The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You have twisted the lemon to the last drop.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh I have not been reading lately... and how I missed you and your writing. love ya lady!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Tart...and lingering beyond the words... that wets the thirst for more. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to read you...I haven't been able to get online because my roommate's back from overseas and he doesn't want to hook his cable internet back up so he uses dial-up... and he's always home! I may have to get my own phone line |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Gold....for someone who deserves gold. Bless you, for blessing her. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I am unsure exactly what you are writing of for Maree, which btw is a most beautiful thing to do, two beautiful people, but it reminded me of those angels . . . the ones with no faces and arms made of metal (tin) and yarn hair . . . do you know the ones I mean? I am rambling . . . *smile* this is lovely |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Susie? That is exactly what she sent me. A wood carved fairy, with metal wings, and a face only implied. on the box, it said, "serenity" thank you all for reading, and Susie? it joys me to know that somebody "saw" what I did, while writing. I have so many faceless treasures in you all. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG get outta here! I adore those angels, and yes, they all are named. Some of them are made to fund breast cancer research, I don't know if they are the same, but God - they are lovely. What a beautiful present. *smiling here* I saw it right away. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Staring with no eyes" .... a very captivating write. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A little italicizing here, a spacing there...and the intonation swings church bells loudly... Enjoyed this, little one... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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