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Open Poetry #33

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-10-01 12:43 PM

Smell the old year die,
hear the rattle of his breath
riding a damp wind.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

1 posted 2004-10-01 01:00 PM

Very nice.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-10-01 01:03 PM

Thanks, Kristabell.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2004-10-01 06:47 PM

enjoyed!
this will be a good one to post again in late December

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-10-01 09:38 PM

Nan~

I just LOVE the picture this paints~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2004-10-02 11:19 AM

Death rattle or snore....
The big death or the small one,
Only Spring can know.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-10-02 12:46 PM

awesome!

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