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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-10-01 09:36 AM

Where is your fullness,
oh half-moon beneath the limbs?
You tarry in her sky-
beyond the vast horizon
so we may gaze together.
[This message has been edited by choshi (10-02-2004 08:43 AM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-10-01 11:08 AM

my goodness, how pretty!!!

Thank you for sharing

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-10-01 11:37 AM

Beautiful...
both the words and the picture.
Very much enjoyed!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-10-01 12:45 PM

Oh that's lovely.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-10-01 11:18 PM

Where is your fullness,
oh half-moon beneath the limbs?
You tarry in her sky-
beyond the vast horizon
so we may gaze together.
************************************

within one sky
two hearts
beat in sync

filling
the gap
between
the distance

healing
the wounded moon.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-10-01 11:57 PM

Hi, Paul

I've just got a little time tonight to read and couldn't resist one of your beautifies! Thanks for the view....*hugs* ......jo

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-10-02 08:43 AM

gently smiling

calming

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-10-02 10:30 AM

missed reading you...

glad I have a little time here today

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-10-02 10:53 AM

missed reading you...

glad I have a little time here today

Awww, Dixie, you are sweet.....I was wondering how you have been with the bad weather and all...My time has been limited also... ~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-10-02 10:54 AM

Dear Dawn,

Smiling along with you [gently]

~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

10 posted 2004-10-02 10:55 AM

Hi, Paul I've just got a little time tonight to read and couldn't resist one of your beautifies! Thanks for the view....*hugs* ......jo

Hi Jo, I know the feeling of being under time-pressure ...thank you for your kind comment..... Back ....~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-10-02 10:57 AM

Where is your fullness,
oh half-moon beneath the limbs?
You tarry in her sky-
beyond the vast horizon
so we may gaze together.
************************************

within one sky
two hearts
beat in sync

filling
the gap
between
the distance

healing
the wounded moon.

~~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~
Between passing clouds,
the hazy white moon lingers
in the daytime sky.

Thank you Michele for your sweet response...

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2004-10-02 10:59 AM

Thank you , Lee J , Enchantress, Pilgrimage ...for your warm comments...I am glad you enjoyed this piece

~P

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2004-10-03 10:04 PM

Enjoyed...James

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2004-10-03 10:17 PM

as usual, both poem and picture were a delight

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

15 posted 2004-10-04 05:22 PM

Margherita the moongazer loves this romantic piece and enjoys the picture!

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