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Open Poetry #33

Am I Blue

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-10-01 01:07 AM

Am I Blue

In her room a piano player
is playing her favorite tune.
A guitar player strums in,
Leonaro begins playing
his painted violin.
With hardly no effort
at all a pretty woman is
singing just like Bacall.
She's a fancy dresser,
nice to the eyes.
The words of her song
providing me with
a lush surprise.
"I better go." I said, even
though she was a delight.
"Baby, why go, when
you can spend the night,
and if you say no, we'll
have our first fight, but
if you say yes, you're in
for lots of kisses tonite."

JamesLee
October01
2004

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2004-10-01 01:33 AM

Diplomacy, a tricky process! Fun write James.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-10-03 12:07 PM

Thank you Larry, much appreciated...James

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