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Skyfire
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0 posted 2004-09-30 07:26 PM



I thought it would be harder
to get my life back


I was wrong

and then He created the horse...

© Copyright 2004 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-09-30 07:57 PM


Yes - good title.  Yes, I'm happy for you.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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2 posted 2004-09-30 07:59 PM


Rhonda,
Are you nuts?! You're young, pretty and have a great sense of humor. It's hard to get your life back when you got nothing going for you.


If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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3 posted 2004-09-30 10:35 PM


Short and SWEET:  "I knew you would."  Way to go!
             misc'e

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4 posted 2004-09-30 10:51 PM


YES!!  You go girl!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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5 posted 2004-10-01 11:45 AM


Absoloutely sublime Rhonda.
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6 posted 2004-10-01 12:22 PM


happy smiles...good one
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7 posted 2004-10-01 12:37 PM


This one makes my heart sing Ronda.  Happy to see such happiness on you!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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8 posted 2004-10-01 12:44 PM


Short and very sweet, actually.  I really like this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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9 posted 2004-10-01 12:58 PM


Nice! Loved this...
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10 posted 2004-10-01 01:25 PM


Nice short but very powerful

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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11 posted 2004-10-02 02:31 AM


Wow, thank you everyone

For a first (in a long time) attempt at writing, this turned out not too badly... *I* am even happy with it ^_^

Thanks so much again!

and then He created the horse...

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